as short as it was (i don't know what the rules of the challenge were), i think you conveyed the meaning well...i feel that alot of what you expressed is how nana really feels. she is in ren's shadow and throughout the manga you can see her trying to get out of it...like in the beginning, how she told shin to surpass ren...and so i don't want to be spoilerific, so i'll just say...that i felt the emotion. well done teankie ^_^
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