Ha! I really liked that. I really enjoyed it - it was very cute. Now I've got a big grin on my face (cuz I realized that if she was early and he was already there, then that meant that he was super early!) I think you captured them both very well but Temari in particular. I thought it was really good.
My concrit is simply that something about the last line doesnt mesh, the line itself doesn't flow. You might want to reword it. That's all!